Critique:
Cover - Colour, hierarchy, what city is it?
Map - Key?
Extra Spread - Put the icon info with the icons on each page, not on a separate spread.
Spreads - What do icons mean? Maybe put icons under prices to make that column more evident. The text is too close to the edge, it looks like it's going to fall off! Fay wants me to return to the idea of the title and quote aligning.
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